例析assignment代写应该怎样积累主题相关表达
发表时间:2017-04-26 10:18:58 作者:zhouzhengmao 阅读:168次
我们在assignment写作的时候可能需要多主题相关表达，例如我们在写“青少年犯罪”这类assignment会用到 juvenile delinquency，young offenders, crime deterrence 这些搭配和词组。那么，我们留学生们平时在完成assignment的时候应该怎样积累这些主题相关表达呢？本文中Meeloun小编就结合英语学习达人魏剑锋的学习精力来为大家分析一下，希望可以帮到大家提高assignment写作水平和质量。
要想积累论文写作的主题表达，那么毫无疑问是跟我们大家平时的阅读积累是分不开的，学习达人魏剑锋给大家推荐的积累渠道是BBC新闻：
大家可以看到BBC新闻下面有多个子频道，比如教育、健康、家庭、环境、文化等，每个频道里面都汇集了大量与主题相关的报道，这些报道里面有很多值得我们学习的地方。举个例子，下面是一篇关于父母使用手机对家庭关系影响的文章节选：
An overuse of mobile phones by parents disrupts family life, according to a survey of secondary pupils. ...
Among the pupils:
82% felt meal times should be device-free
22% said the use of mobiles stopped their families enjoying each other's company
36% had asked their parents to put down their phones ...
Research last year by DAUK and HMC showed almost half of secondary pupils were checking their mobile phones after they had gone to bed, amid warnings that they were arriving at school tired and unable to concentrate.
上面段落中加下划线的短语 an overuse of mobile phones，disrupt family life，device-free，enjoy each other's company，arrive at school tired and unable to concentrate 都是看起来很简单但又非常实用的写作表达。长期阅读这些文章并积累好词好句会使我们的遣词造句能力得到很大提升。如果大家觉得自己的assignment完成之后重合率过高，可以查看我们之前的文章《合理改述是assignment写作避免抄袭的关键法宝》通过合理的改述来降低的assignment的重合率。
我们就以下面这个例子来为大家分析一下：
Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
这是原始作文版本：
As English becomes the world dominant language, minority languages are put in a dangerous place.People who appeal to protect them with tax revenue are opposed by those who regard it as an abuse of public funds.I would argue that the endangered languages should be saved and the government should give financial priority to other important areas, such as education and technology.
The minority languages are a cultural treasure for human beings, which are worth our preservation. Although the languages cannot directly boost economic growth, they are the essence of specific civilization, inheriting different beliefs and values. By contrast, if one day there were on longer other languages except English, the multicultural society would die out as well as the language.As a result, we need to take measures to keep them alive.For instance, the government can establish an institution that recruits interested and capable volunteers to learn and inherit the nearly disappearing languages.Such method does need financial support, but with the help of social funds, it will not take up too much public resources.
On the other hand, the limited revenue of government might be better spend on fields that help improve living standards and make economy productive. The reason why is that many important concerns are under-funded. First, people living under the poverty line still have to struggle for living.It is the government who is responsible for using state pensions to reduce social inequality. Second, education and high technology means the future of a country, so they deserve more financial support.
In conclusion, saving endangered languages need to share revenue moderately ,but a wise government should take advantage of public fund to benefit taxpayers.
以下是点评之后的版本：
As English becomes the world's dominant language, minority languages are put in a dangerous place. People who appeal to protect (support protecting) them with tax revenue are opposed by those who regard it as an abuse of public funds. I would argue that the (\) endangered languages should be saved and the government should give financial priority to other important areas, such as education and technology.
The (\) minority languages are a cultural treasure for human beings, which are worth our preservation. Although the languages cannot directly boost economic growth, they are the essence of specific civilization, inheriting different beliefs and values. (they constitute a reservoir of cultural and historical knowledge) By contrast, if one day there were on (no) longer other languages except English, the multicultural society would die out as well as the language. (many cultures would die out with languages) As a result, we need to take measures to keep them alive. For instance, the government can establish an institution that recruits interested and capable (enthusiastic and qualified) volunteers to learn and inherit the nearly (\) disappearing languages. Such method does need financial support, but with the help of social funds, it will not take up too much public resources.
On the other hand, the limited revenue of the government might be better spend on fields that help improve living standards and make the economy productive. The reason why (behind this) is that many important concerns are under-funded. First, people living under the poverty line still have to struggle for living. It is the government who is responsible for using state pensions to reduce social inequality. Second, education and high technology means the future of a country, so they deserve more financial support.
（这一段离题了，题目是问政府是否应该花钱拯救濒危语言，而不是问政府怎么改善民生）
In conclusion, saving endangered languages need to share revenue moderately, (governments should use public money to save endangered languages) but a wise government should take advantage of public funds to benefit taxpayers.
思路分析：
Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
小语种消失是目前几乎所有国家都面临的一个问题，而对于政府是否应该拯救濒危语言目前也有不少争议。支持政府拯救小语种的人认为，语言背后承载的是文化以及身份认同，一旦语言消失，语言背后的文化知识以及身份认同感也会随着消失。
另一部分人则认为，语言的消亡只是一种自然演化过程。历史上曾经有无数种语言产生和消亡，这种自然进程是很难干预的。同时，一些少数族裔因为语言问题而无法与主流社会相融合，政府保护小语种的行为可能会加剧这种状况，不利于社会和谐。
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