留学生论文代写改述（Paraphrasing）举例

发表时间:2017-04-27 14:24:57 作者:zhouzhengmao 阅读:185次

在之前的文章《合理改述是assignment写作避免抄袭的关键法宝》当中我们可以大家说了论文如何进行正确改述，那么这篇文章Meeloun小编就通过实例来为大家分析具体应该如何去对留学论文进行改述（Paraphrasing），大家可以学习一下。

原文如下：
      Students frequently overuse direct quotation in taking notes, and as a result they overuse quotations in the final [research] paper. Probably only about 10% of your final manuscript should appear as directly quoted matter. Therefore, you should strive to limit the amount of exact transcribing of source materials while taking notes. 
      Lester, James D. Writing Research Papers. 2nd ed. (1976): 46-47.

改述版本一（中等）：
      In research papers students often quote excessively, failing to keep quoted material down to a desirable level. Since the problem usually originates during note taking, it is essential to minimize the material recorded verbatim (Lester 46-47).

改述版本二（较优）：
      Students should take just a few notes in direct quotation from sources to help minimize the amount of quoted material in a research paper (Lester 46-47).

上面两个被改述的版本就是非常合理的，但是如果大家像下面这样去改的画将会被认为是抄袭：
      Students often use too many direct quotations when they take notes, resulting in too many of them in the final research paper. In fact, probably only about 10% of the final copy should consist of directly quoted material. So it is important to limit the amount of source material copied while taking notes.
      我们可以看到上面这段抄袭版本基本上就是很低级地换了同义词，简单变换句子。实际上和原文差不多，如果这样你也想逃过Turnitin检测？简直痴人说梦啊有木有！

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