护理论文代写超出字数限制了如何合理修改？
发表时间:2018-02-27 08:51:42 作者:zhouzhengmao 阅读:193次
我们留学生在论文的时候常常会出现字数不够或者超过字数限制的情况，字数不够那么肯定是要被扣分的，字数过多老师也不会把评阅别人论文的时间全花在你的论文上，所以按照老师的字数要求来完成论文显得非常重要。字数不够的情况比较多，而字数超出限制的情况比较少见但也不是没有，本文中meeloun教育小编就针对后者的情况告诉大家如何对超出字数限制的论文进行合理修改。
如果是大家选择了护理论文代写的话，一般情况下代写机构是会严格按照字数来写的，毕竟代写论文一般都是按字数收费。当大家在自己写论文的时候字数过多时，显得累赘，传达信息不够清晰，可以怎么删减字数? 除了透过整合句子之外，是否还有其他方法?详戳下文：
先看看以下范文:
We should take into consideration several factors.
He must make a decision about what to do.
They gave us information about the new research program.
上方句子在文法上是完全正确，但因为不直接使用动词而选择该动词的名词型而导致字数变多且不够直接与简洁。
We should take into consideration several factors. [7个字]
He must make a decision about what to do. [9个字]
They gave us information about the new research program. [9个字]
红色部分就是名词化，我们可以将这部分直接用一个动词替换，建议写作时多注意句型 。
We should consider several factors. [5个字]
He must decide about what to do. [7个字]
They informed us about the new research program. [8个字]
动词名词化还有另一个缺点就是容易写出被动语态结构：
× The analysis of how X-factor impacts B gene expression was conducted. [11个字]
√ We analyzed X-factor’s impact on B gene expression. [8个字]
利用把名词化转成一个动词，轻轻松松把句子转成主动语态并成功缩减字数。
如果你查找常见的动词名词化，可以发现一个模式。动词使用像是“make”和“take”，动名词（verb + ing），或名词由-tion，-sion，-ment，-ence，和-ance结尾的，很高机率都有一个相对应 动词， 所以当你在修改英文时，利用寻找功能找出这些结尾和动词后修正就行。
什么时候该修改动词名词化？
有时候动词名词化的确是必须或无法避免的，但目前我们是过度使用了。下面我们列出常见的应修正名词化的情况：
1，无意义动词 + 动词名词形:删除无意义的，将动词名词形转换为主要动词。
Joe will conduct research on the impact of the recent drought on local wildlife. → Joe will research the recent drought’s impact on local wildlife.
The board will make a decision next week about whether to accept you next week. → The board will decide next week whether to accept you.
2，当动词名词形是被动语态结构的主词时：找出真正的主词，并将动词名词形转换为该主题的动词。
The approval of the plan was given by the committee yesterday. → The committee approved the plan yesterday.
3，动词名词形两两相接:转化第一个动词名词形为动词，保留第二个或将其转化成疑问子句。
Their interpretation of the implementation of the institute’s program was insightful. → They insightfully interpreted how the institute implemented its program.
First was their introduction of their analysis of dreams by the trauma patients. → First, they introduced how they analyzed the trauma patients’ dreams.
4，当主词中的动词名词形与谓词的动词名词形时:将两个动词名词形转成动词，考量两者的关系并加上合理的连接词(because, when, if, although, even though, despite, etc.)。
Her understanding of the situation was evidenced by the quitting of her job. → She understood the situation … she quit her job → When she quit her job, she showed she understood the situation.
参考以下范文:
The blood pressure of the mice was elevated.
The elephant teetered along the edge of the cliff.
The focus of this project was to study the effects of increased global temperatures on local fish hatcheries.
可以发现找不出一个文法错误的地方，但是你有发现他们超级wordy吧!现在就要来示范怎样利用消除介词把它们缩短。
The blood pressure of the mice was elevated. [8 words]
The elephant teetered along the edge of the cliff. [9 words]
The focus of this project was to study the effects of increased global temperatures on local fish hatcheries. [19 words]
我们将可以删除的介词用红色标出
The mice’s blood pressure was elevated. [6 words]
The elephant teetered along the cliff’s edge. [7 words]
This project examined how increased global temperatures affect local fish hatcheries. [11 words]
以上的范文只要用两个字去替换删掉的介系词片语就可以成功缩短字数了。假设文章中充满上方这一类的句型，那删的字数可多了。
可以删掉介词的情况有很多，上方范文只是一小部分，而这一篇文章提到的也是其中之一。记忆力好的人应该还可以想起来使用动词名词形容易让人写出被动语态。
下方介绍那些状况的介系词片语你可以修改，同时介绍该怎么修改。
1，改成所有格:
许多高度相关的情况下，例如两个名词之间的所有权，就可以删掉中间的介词。例如，句子中有「Noun1 of Noun 2」或「Location1 in Location2」，直接将第二个名词往前移并加上「’」 变成Noun1’s Noun2。
The approval of the Food and Drug Administration was received yesterday. → The Food and Drug Administration’s approval was received yesterday.
The studies were conducted at Max Laboratories in Chicago. → The studies were conducted at Chicago’s Max Laboratories.
2，改成主动语态:
当被动语态的句子后面跟着「by」的时候 (Noun1 was/were + past participle + by + Noun2)，把by后面的名词改成句子主词写成主动语态。
The approval of the plan was given by the committee. → The committee approved the plan yesterday.
3，替换副词形式:
某些介系词片语可以改的更为坚定，例如:由「with」开头的片语。
The seller agreed with reluctance. → The seller reluctantly agreed.
He spoke with hesitation when he accepted the deal. → He spoke hesitantly as he accepted the deal.
By chance, I finished work on time. → Fortuitously, I finished work on time.
4，改成更精准的动词:
有些介系词片语可以用更有力、精准的动词替换掉。可多加注意动词使用「get」和「make」。
He got to the finish line. → He reached the finish line.
Increased benefits can make up for long working hours. → Increased benefits can offset long working hours.
5，避免动词名词形
6，检视该片语的重要性:
有些介系词片语在句中并没有任何作用或价值，建议直接删掉。
In our current situation, we should decline the offer. → We should decline the offer.
7，尝试wh-子句:
动词跟「说」(例:ask, say, admit, argue, reply, agree, mention, explain, suggest, etc.) 或「心理状态」像是thinking、studying和deciding (例: know, understand, suppose, remember, forget, wonder, study, examine, decide, etc.)有关的，建议大胆尝试wh-子句来写出有力简洁的句子。
The purpose of this study was to examine the effects of solar radiation on bioluminescence. → This study examined how solar radiation affects bioluminescence.
Our mission was to conduct an investigation into the relationship between sunlight and plant growth. → We investigated how sunlight affects plant growth.
我们习惯使用太多应该要避免的填充词，大多数都是从口语中养成习惯再影响到写作。
什么是填充字(filler)?
填充字在句子里完全没有任何功用，只有「占位置」。因为我们时常不自觉的将说话的方式套用在写作上。拿我们博客为例，我们以对话方式来撰写是为了让读者容易理解，我们不用担心字数限制也希望透过轻松地叙述风格让读者了解英文写作信息，可是学术写作上的用字则不能这样使用，必须要精确。
一般写作和学术写作都应避免填充词与不必要的单字、片语
来看看以下句子，你能找出句中的填充词和其他的冗词吗?
There is an octopus sitting on top of my car.
This is actually an interesting question.
In order to apply the new method to our entire system, perhaps we should perform a local test.
句子语法都没错，可是能更精简
There is an octopus sitting on top of my car. [10 字]
This is actually an interesting question. [6 字]
In order to apply the new method to our entire system, perhaps we should perform a local test. [18字]
来看看精简后版本
An octopus is sitting on my car. [7 字]
This question is interesting. [4 字]
We should perform a local test before applying the new method to our system. [14 字]
删除填充词可以有效缩减字数，平均比例是25-30%的句长。假设把这比例放到论文上来看，单单删掉填充词就成功”瘦身” 25-30%。
如何找出并修改填充词?
为了加强护理论文写作和修改技巧跟节省你的时间，我们在下方列出了常见的填充词与或不必要的单字/片语，同时也提供了适合大部分情况的修改建议，当然你也可以照自己的其他方式修改。
